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The internet is such a great place. I’ve published Mister.. and now currently working on Part II. Still working on Nervous II. I love to write and its an outlet for me. Through my process of becoming an indie writer. I’ve realized that the most important thing is an editor. A good one at that, because indie writers are competing with traditional writers, and we must give the readers the same professional product, a well written, and edited book. I’m currently thinking about submitting to a publisher, but I love the control of self publishing. Everything is much hands on. The hardest part of this journey is PROMOTION. I’ve recently contacted a publicist to help with promotion. With school and work I don’t have a lot of time to promote. I really enjoyed the feedback from Mister, because a lot of the time I don’t really ask for opinion as far as stories. Well I think I will continue to ask for feedback. I love the constructive criticism it has helped me to work harder and better as a writer. I have so much potiental to be a wonderful writer. Well go to go, I’m not feeling to well.
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Jayelle rolled over across her king size bed only to find the other side empty. She sat up in bed and observed the clock. It’s four in the morning where the hell is he? She thought. Deshawn wasn’t anywhere to be found. Another lonely night but she wanted things to change. Jayelle and Deshawn had only been living together for about three months. It was Deshawn’s idea to live together in the first place. This wasn’t the first night he hadn’t come home. In fact he hadn’t really stayed a whole night with her since she graduated.
Jayelle looked down at her engagement ring. Jayelle let out a deep breathe. She tried to remain cool but she was getting tired of his cheating ways. She rolled her eyes and took it off.
Jayelle couldn’t sleep and decided to check her email. She received the usual notification from Twitter, Facebook, but her eyes stopped on an invitation to a chat room. Sexyflirt.com
Deshawn has all the fun why can’t I? She thought, going to the website. She set up her account and instantly she received private messages. She scrolled through her messages only to see pictures of guy’s members. I’m not ready for all of that. Jayelle laughed. All the guys wanted to talk about sex and she wasn’t interested. One private message did catch her eye. MrBusiness couldn’t be so bad since he greeted her and didn’t send her naked pictures.
MrBusiness: How are you miss?
Jayelle frowned when she saw his picture. The picture only displayed his body from the neck down. What could this guy be hiding? Maybe he’s ugly. His body is amazing though She thought.
PinklipstickLover: I’m great just can’t sleep
Jayelle stared at her Mac laptop screen. ASL didn’t ring a bell and she didn’t want to seem like an old lady that didn’t know the chat room lingo.
MrBusiness: Age, sex, location.
PinklipstickLover: Oh sorry, 21, f, Maryland
MrBusiness: 38, m, UK I’m not too old am I miss?
MrBusiness: Good, you’re beautiful miss, your boyfriend is a lucky man
PinklipstickLover: He’s out doing god knows what
MrBusiness: What’s your name miss?
PinklipstickLover: Jayelle.. you?
MrBusiness: Steven, I’m sorry for your boyfriend’s behavior. I’ll keep you company.
Jayelle smiled. Could it be possible that everyone in chat rooms weren’t weirdos and pervs.
Finally she had someone to listen to her problems. Sexy guy, from the UK but he’s white. Jayelle wasn’t too fond of white guys especially for a love interest. The sun peeked through her curtain windows and she still was talking to Steven. From movies to music surprisingly they had a lot in common. She didn’t know it was possible to hold a mere conversation with a guy twice her age.
“Baby….” Deshawn said coming into the room. Jayelle closed her Mac laptop she didn’t want him to see kept her up all night.
Deshawn wrapped his strong chocolate arms around her and kissed on her neck. Deshawn had always been her type. Deshawn was her age as well. Tall, dark and handsome what more could she want. But his cheating ways weren’t worth the heartache.
Jayelle inhaled his scent. He smelled like another woman. She knew that he had been cheating on her. She didn’t care anymore she just waited for the right time to leave him. She just didn’t know when exactly she would move out. Four long years invested in him and the engagement ring meant nothing.
“I missed you last night,” he said kissing her.
Jayelle moved away from him. “I’m not in the mood,” she said walking into the bathroom. She turned the shower on.
Deshawn followed her into the bathroom. “Why not?,” Deshawn said grabbing her waist. Jayelle was trapped in the arm’s of her cheating boyfriend. She stood in a place she didn’t want to be.
“Where were you last night?” she said staring into his dark brown eyes. She loved staring into his eyes but for the first time she didn’t feel anything.
“I went out with Cj and I was too drunk to drive baby,” he said.
Jayelle shook her head. “Really, that sounds like lies, since you smell like another woman,” she said shutting the bathroom door. She didn’t want to argue either. She didn’t want to hear anything he had to say. When she finished her shower she realized he was gone.
Jayelle found herself wanting to talk to Steven again. Deshawn didn’t pay her attention anymore. Could it be possible that she’s catching feeling for a stranger. A sexy, stranger but nevertheless, a stranger. Jayelle sent him a private message in the chat room.
I hope he is awake because I miss him. She thought.
PinklipstickLover: Are you awake?
She waited fifteen minutes for a response but she didn’t receive anything. Maybe he wasn’t interested anymore. It had to be hundreds of girls wanting to occupy his time. Why would he care about a young American girl anyways. She thought.
Jayelle licked her lips. Images of doing things she didn’t even do with her boyfriend flashed in her heads. How could it be possible that she wanted him sexually and that topic never came up. The conversation lasted hours but still he didn’t show any interest in her sexually.
Jayelle started to close her MAC laptop, when suddenly she realized she had an instant message.
MrBusiness: I’m naked and I want you and you only
Jayelle’s jaw dropped when she read that message. Did he send it to the wrong person? Maybe it was a mistake.
MrBusiness: Jayelle I know you’re there and yes I want you NOW.